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picture by traerene
This is the older version, yes I know it is grammaticaly incorrect in places ;) THere was a plan.
Tsunami is a large tidal wave if u dint know



My poem entry to Hidden qualities:



Her spirit lays,

Immortalised,

With gentle waters,

Bubbling surf,

A salty breeze,

Its Crisp and fresh.



Once right here,

On pebbles smooth,

She sat and stared,

At gathering storm,

White horses leap,

With frothy manes



And Mount a great stockade,

This tempest loomed,

From waters deep,

Tsunami rose again,

His great head arched,

Bolts towards the Earth.



Great wall of water,

Its Sprinting forth,

Murderous mind,

Towards the stony shore,

Where my Mother sat,

Watching Tsunami tall,



The great wave crashed,

Noise like bombs,

Engulfing all below,

Rocks torn up,

Cries Faded away,

Toppled to the ground.



Beach left bare,

No plants nor life,

Tsunami struck again.

In this place rests a soul,

Beauty of the ocean blue,

In silence waits again.



My mothers spirit,

Now gently calls,

Hear her in the breeze,

For on that rock,

She sat and watched,

Tsunami rise again.


















































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gorgeous -- I love it !
^_^ beautiful. splendid. and glorious.

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Great job, love the pic + the poem Clap

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Wow.. beautiful picture and wonderful poem. I simply love it! I can't describe it with so limited words so I'll just stare in awe..*stares*

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beautifulll!!....nice imagery....great job! Hug
LUVERLY!!

Very descriptive and all round darn good!

Winner Winner Winner

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Absolutely great Si! hope u do well

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Ok few typos in there, sorry i did write it at 1:30am so wasnt wide awake.

Ans = and
gorund = ground
is silence waits again = in silence
Clap awesome... love the picture and amazing poem u got there....awesome...it was so awesome that i didint even see the typos...awesome...keep it up. Horns c ya Peace

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